3 different portraits. need C&C!!!

nrois02 · May 28, 2009

so im not really into portraits yet but i was wondering what you guys think and give me some constructive criticism! thanks

1) a little blurry i know... i wasent trying to use a flash cause i only had the stock one

2)again little blurry

3)

thanks for looking!

nrois02 · May 30, 2009

anyone have any feedback for these?

twozero · May 30, 2009

i like the mood of the first one a lot. i especially like the amount of light on the guitar.

#2 is underexposed too much. i like the amount of negative space because it really brings attention to the couple, but the couple is just too dark and the shadows are pretty harsh. try getting the light source closer to help soften the shadows.

#3 is good, i really dig it. it is fresh and simple. most importantly it looks natural. the color temp reminds me of the beach in fall, possibly. but this shot is nice. it could possibly use a bump in exosure, but that to me would be nit-picking.

nrois02 · May 30, 2009

thanks man. that helps a lot!

Alpha · May 30, 2009

#1 is pretty good but most certainly needs more light on the face.

#2 I do not understand. I've gotta be honest with you. That is the most retarded pose I have ever seen. And his face is out of focus.

#3 Is nice but looks like a standard snapshop- which is fine because that seems to be what it is.

delizo23 · Jun 2, 2009

number 1 would be ok if it was in focus and better lit. faster shutter to make his hand not blurry

yea number 2 is kinda pornographic haha. and his face is out of focus. and composition is weird.

number 3 just looks like normal. maybe a better crop. house is crooked.