3 Hot Ladies C&C

[buddah2099]

More of my friends in costume. Looking for C&C to improve my photography.

 

[Big Mike]

The girl on the left has very dark eyes. Looks like a lot of makeup, but the lighting and PP aren't helping. She almost looks like a zombie. :shock:

The girl on the right is posing for the camera, but I think she would appreciate the photo more if she was turned a little bit toward the camera. This angle isn't flattering to her backside with that very tight outfit.

The girl in the middle seems to be looking off camera, which doesn't jive well with the girl who is looking right at the camera.

The vignette is cutting into the girl on the left, I'd prefer that it didn't.

 

[Steve Reddin]

Hi,

I'd have said the above comments too. In addition the softening effect is too strong, the faces look flat as a result, particularly so on the girl to the left. This flattening affect has probably been increased by the desaturation used.

Steve