3 Still life macro.

[UUilliam]

In college, we are doing still life.
While doing my still life, I decided to use some macro (using macro extension tubes I got for £5 with my 85mm lens.)
I won't give away what it is just yet (not that it is too hard.)
but I am thinking of submitting it into the photography Exhibition.
I just need a little bit of criticism just now.

like all images, I like them at first then about 3 - 4 days later I end up hating them, so give your honest opinions.

P.s. my laptop is calibrated using the Spyder 3 pro, I have noticed that un-calibrated monitors seem to make it brighter (duller) and less vibrant
But I also suspect my monitor's white balance is too warm.

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[Davor]

well let me start off by asking you what this is? before i proceed any further.

 

[UUilliam]

as not to completly give it away, I have encoded into the post the name of the object (re-read top, it is in order, join the red letters together .)

 

[UUilliam]

no replies?

 

[Davor]

i guess it has its sense of art, but for the most part its really hard to make out what it is unless you where to tell someone. The last 2 are quite blurry and hard to make out, its just a blur. but maybe it has its place in some art form.

 

[thingsIsee]

tomato, but there's little detail, no real color definition and blurry.

 

[FoggyLens]

I could tell it was a tomato right away.. lol. agree with thingsIsee.