A couple from Gettysburg

[mommyphotog]

1.
Thank you 20th by bettylou0329, on Flickr
2.
Tower by bettylou0329, on Flickr
3.
084b by bettylou0329, on Flickr
4.
Cannon by bettylou0329, on Flickr


Let me know what you think.

 

[Olympus E300]

I like the 1st and last shot. The first shot doesn't really "say" anything to me, however, I do like the color layout. The paper seems awefully blurry around the edges though (2 sheets of paper?) and I find that to be distracting. The last shot I like, probably because I have a special place in my heart for firearms and things that go "bang". I like the composition here - being able to see partway down the canon barrel is a nice touch and the carriage wheel being in the shot even though out of focus easily identifies the subject yet allows your eye to wonder down the barrel (focused portion of the shot). There is always something eerie about looking down the business end of a firearm (of any stature).

Cheers!
- Daniel

 

[Malone]

I like #1; the "USA" in focus and "thank you" in the background is pretty cool.

2 & 3 seem to both be leaning to the right, maybe try to straighten them up a bit. Also, the 2nd has a glare sport or something in the center that is a bit distracting. Beautiful sky colors in both!

 

[mommyphotog]

Thanks for the replies.

 

[TCD photography]

1 & 4 are my absolute favorites.

1: Love this idea!
2: Weird bright spot...
3: Leaning to the right, but easily fixed.
4: I'm particularly fond of canons, really like the focus.