A Few From Yesterday's Shoot For C&C

[MikeBookPro]

I had a bit of a "mock" photo play date yesterday. Here are a few shots from the day. C&C on all of things I've been having trouble with in previous threads would be appreciated.

#1
I like this one. I think it captures the "dirty, tired little girl who is having fun at the park" factor pretty well.

#2
I wish I hadn't tilted the camera. Unfortunately, the composition makes it tough to salvage by rotating it level in Photoshop. I still think it's cute, though.

#3

 

[Sirene]

Don't worry about #2, it is just amazing !!

 

[Lightspeedfoto]

#2 is really awesome! did you use any lights/flash? or was it available light?

 

[fiveoboy01]

I like #2 the best, though by the direction she's looking, the girl on the left looks distracted and not really caring about the other girl that she's hugging.

#3 the top of her hands and hair are blown out.

To me the focus looks a little soft on all 3 of them.

 

[MikeBookPro]

I like #2 the best, though by the direction she's looking, the girl on the left looks distracted and not really caring about the other girl that she's hugging.

I have this one, too, but I thought the kiss was cuter. Thoughts?

 

[MikeBookPro]

#2 is really awesome! did you use any lights/flash? or was it available light?

Available light.

 

[RussJasper]

#2 is great.

i think your watermark or whatever is far too large though, kinda distracting from the photos.

 

[Jeffro]

I like the bottom one better than number 2 cause both sets of eyes are looking at me!!! That one is great!

 

[fiveoboy01]

Agreed, the second one with the two girls is much better.