A few more pinup style

[ababysean]

I'd love some C/C on these. I am going to put together a shoot in a few weeks for several women wanting similar shots for their hubbys so any C&C is appreciated.
Thanks

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[Ryan L]

I do like #4 better than the one posted yesterday (even though I liked the concept of the heel on the stocking). Again something with the hands, the spread fingers draw me into them. Heres my thought, the nails I think this would benefit so much if she had a manicure with something other than white tips. They just blend in with the rug making them look extremely short. I think long nails with another color would be a benefit. I could be being WAY picky here though.

 

[astroskeptic]

As a Y-chromosome owner, I love these for completely non-technical reasons, particularly 1 and 4. As regards the utter disregard displayed for the rule of thirds, you have my unreserved forgiveness.

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. This one is a bit complicated for my tastes; it's a neat idea, but just a little too busy I think.

2. Very nice; I think your key light is just a bit hot however, and remember to check for things like the white bra/shirt/?? showing under her black top. Great expression.

3. Very nice, excellent lighting.

4. Classic. Well done.

5. Great lighting, but the pose isn't really working for me.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[Geaux]

Just a random question ... and I'm not trying to out you, but if these ladies are taking these for private use of their husbands, don't you feel a little weird posting their half nakedness on a public forum for random guys to gawk at? I'm a male, and I don't think I'd appreciate my photographer posting shots that my wife had taken just for me, but that could just be me lol.

Do your clients sign a form that allows the public posting of any image they take with you?

Again, I'm not trying to out you or raise a fight (I promise -- b/c, I'm a guy ... and well .... I enjoy these a lot lol), just a random question, especially when it comes to something like this.

 

[ababysean]

These are not for private use! This was a get together at the studio, I have signed model release for every one of the women. The private ones for the females I am going to shoot in a few weeks will not be posted anywhere, not even for c/c. These are models, who TFP with me and also the makeup artist and hair stylist.

 

[ababysean]

C&C per req:

1. This one is a bit complicated for my tastes; it's a neat idea, but just a little too busy I think.

2. Very nice; I think your key light is just a bit hot however, and remember to check for things like the white bra/shirt/?? showing under her black top. Great expression.

3. Very nice, excellent lighting.

4. Classic. Well done.

5. Great lighting, but the pose isn't really working for me.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

1. A spontaneous shot while everyone was getting up so I could fix the rug. lol

2. It was a HUGE umbrella, one light bounced back into the umbrella. I know there is a name for this type of umbrella but I'm drawing a blank. It almost went from floor to 12 foot ceilings! lol
She had two tanks on, white under black, so it wasn't a bra, but another shirt underneath.

3. Thanks

4. Thanks

5. I have more with different poses! lol

 

[Dominantly]

#3 & 4 are my favorites of the set.

 

[Dominantly]

I'm fully onboard with that statement.

 

[vtf]

 

[mwcfarms]

3 and 4 are my favorite. 4 is good but at first I thought she was missing a glove holding a stick and now see its her glove. Duh. Nice pics ababysean. Are you using your gear to shoot these or the studios other than the lighting of course.

 

[Morpheuss]

man i need to stop looking at these kind of forums... i see the pictures and my jaw hits the floor and i forget to even look at them at a technical point of view...

 

[ababysean]

Every picture was taken with my NikonD3000.
The studios lights and triggers are used.

 

[Ryan L]

Ohh and on the non technical side. #1 looks like way too much fun, well if I could add a 4th in the mix....I can be free monday-sunday pretty much any day of the year and at any hour. lol

 

[ababysean]

:lmao:

That was a total goof ball shot. They were all laying facing away from me with their legs in the air. They were all getting up and I was like hold that! lol