A few shots for c&c am i getting somewhere?

[hrry]

 

[willis_927]

I think so. The sky is blown but I don't think that takes away from the pictures. Could probably clone out some of the crap on the ground in #2, and also the people in the background. #1 doesn't do much for me, but I do like #2... although it does appear a bit soft.

 

[HomelessBoy]

I personally like #1 the most, it probably will look so much better if you left the colours natural. And why would you bring a helmet when you are not going to wear it.

The lens flare ruined #2 at the bottom right corner. It would probably look better if you slow down the shutter speed and give a bit of motion.

No offense, but in #3, your model looks like he's enjoying the pole thing in his ass.

 

[hrry]

Thanks people, i'll have a go at cleaning up the backgrounds.

#3 i was enjoying it ahaa

 

[joealcantar]

On the 1st shot the sky is not adding anything to the shot, maybe try a horizontal crop. If it was being used for a magazine it would work as it would allow for printing etc.
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Shoot well and thanks for sharing, Joe
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Here is a crop , you want it to lead into something as he moves.

 

[hrry]

Yeah i see what you mean, i just think the sky gives it a sense of adventure without sounding too weird, kind of relates to the bike. But i do get you the crop does look better, thanks for the feedback guys.