The first eight downloaded so that is where I will stop!
#1. There is a touch of raccoon eyes, wrinkles in the shirt, the image is flat lit and the left arm looks strange.
# 2. Raccoon eyes again, the crop is very unusual and his hand looks deformed.
# 3. The kicker light (sunlight) is rather bright and there is a bright spot on his nose from it also. He is square to the camera.
# 4. Pose is static and the kicker is again too bright.
# 5. Square to camera, the double kicker isn't good. I like the nice relaxed pose and his genuine smile, but I would crop off his legs as they do nothing to strengthen or enhance the image.
# 6. Lighting isn't good, but you have a very interesting pose idea. I may steal this one!
# 7. This is another good idea but it needs to be taken on a football field, or cropp out the pond! (I think water traps are only found in golf? Correct?)
# 8. I like the pose, but his hands look balled up. Placing one hand grasping the wrist of the other arm looks much better.
All in all you did a nice job for a first timer. I would be proud of these.
Tally