A portrait in B&W (woman)
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Rockkkkin
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I am a noob here, but if you wouldnt mind my comments....
I would have asked the subject to come forward a little to create that gap between her and the wall for a portrait. Also a part of her hair (to the top) is cut off...
I would have asked the subject to come forward a little to create that gap between her and the wall for a portrait. Also a part of her hair (to the top) is cut off...
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The first thing that I see when I look at this shot is her headband, as opposed to her eyes, or her face.
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The headband is distracting, her head is cut off, and it seems like she is standing in an awkward position.
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