Still super saturated but not as painful as the other one It's fun to go crazy with tone mapping when you first get started, but you'll catch a lot of flack for it on the forums. Some images look good all "cooked up", some not so much, and unfortunately I think this is a case of "not so much".
In regards to composition, you cut off the very top edge of the front of the building, which hurts the overall look of the image to me. Another foot back or zoomed out just a bit (depending on the lens used of course) would have made this much better compositionally speaking
Don't let me discourage you from trying. I am not trying to be a jerk or anything, if I didn't see some potential I wouldn't bother posting
Newbie here. Just wanted to say I agree with Zombie.. Maybe even closer to the subject and a higher angle would enhance the height aspect of the building... just a thought.