A story within a story...

[JWellman]

"A story within a story" - Courier Journal newspaper dated April 29, 1994

I really wanted this one for my one a day collection because I liked the angle better but the paper was not legible.

 

[Davor]

i like the idea but a few thing i feel like are a little off, like the word "People" in the first image looks like its photoshoped in there even though its not. I think the flowers should be replaced by a snack of some-sort, like breakfast or a bagel , donuts etc... I just don't understand why they are in a bowl. And maybe tone down the sepia just a tad. Good composition though

 

[JWellman]

I think the flowers should be replaced by a snack of some-sort, like breakfast or a bagel , donuts etc... I just don't understand why they are in a bowl.

Thanks for the help Davor... point well taken about the roses. The roses were being stored in the fridge from another photo I had taken so I grabbed them and put them on the table. A bagel would have been nicer, if I hadn't eaten it. :lmao:

My main focus was my daughter's image in the 17 year old paper...the roses was a bad afterthought!