A Swimmer's Stance

[123rfanna]

Just a little for fun shot, not sure if this angle works best or should it be a front-facing shot instead?
Camera: Canon 1Ds Mark III
Shutter speed: 1/200sec
Aperture: f/9
ISO: 250
Lens: Canon 70-200mm 2.8

 

[DanOstergren28 3]

I think it's great. It reminds me of the cover of Surface Magazine's "Soft Geometry" issue.

I think a slightly looser crop would really improve this shot. As well I think the perspective would be improved by rotating the model just slightly so his head is closer to the camera, and to shoot from a slightly lower angle in order to better see both of his arms. I suggest a lower angle because I think it would compliment the diving concept by making it seem like we the viewer are looking up toward the diver, as most do when watching someone take a dive.

 

[123rfanna]

I think it's great. It reminds me of the cover of Surface Magazine's "Soft Geometry" issue.

I think a slightly looser crop would really improve this shot. As well I think the perspective would be improved by rotating the model just slightly so his head is closer to the camera, and to shoot from a slightly lower angle in order to better see both of his arms. I suggest a lower angle because I think it would compliment the diving concept by making it seem like we the viewer are looking up toward the diver, as most do when watching someone take a dive.

I like your feedback Dan! I will try more athlete shots, basically my goal was to showcase the grit and determination of sportspeople but you're right, a lower angle and maybe a hint of the diving board might help enhance he shot better, thanks!