Absolute Joy ,,,

[elking]

Hey Everyone
Here's a new photo i've atken for my cousin ,,,
he was on a swing for da 1st time in his life ,, so u can imagine wut dat means to a Kid ... No wonder he was helpless ... In being HAPPY !

Lookin Forward 2 ur Critiques ,,, and comments ..
Take Care​

 

[matt-l]

Im sorry, but "da" does not substitute for "the", "dat" does not substitute for "that"
2 does not substitute for "to, or two, or too" and ur does not cut it for Your, Msn talk is for msn, please don't type like this.


as for the shot, it's blurry, I understand it was on the swing but it's really blurry. Also try not to cut off any ears or limbs for that matter, it really takes away from the photo.

-Matt.

 

[elking]

Hi Matt ,, srry 4 the shortcuts ,,, just that i've been used to it ,,
and yeah ,, thnx for the critique .. unfortuantely that was the best clearance i could get ,, would work on that forward ...
Thnnx

 

[Icon72]

Wow, please use the proper english language on the forums. I'll be blunt here, get used to using at least some semblance of grammar.