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Thanks for looking. What kind of improvements do I need?

Pictures on Page 1 and 2. Thanks for looking.
 
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Not liking this at all. You have so much CA in that shot that its just crazy. The angle just is not working, maybe if you would have got the whole car in there but the way you cropped it is wacky...
 
I really like how the processing worked on the driveway and the fence. Try to get a better shot, a better angle, and a lot of the fence in the background. Use things that work to your advantage. The processing, however, did not work well on the car itself. Unless that is a matte finish on that car, you really didn't bring out the best of it. The car should be shiny, and it looks dull. I would really like to see a redo on this, as there is a lot of potential in this shot.
 
Is that a camera strap at the bottom?
 
Jaime, there are a few problems with the HDR processing and all you can see is a bit of camera strap. You have a sharp eye. A dull brain but a sharp eye.
 
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Did a little edit what do you guys think?
 
yeah it does look dull. I don't know how to make the hood look white.
 
This needs to be approached at a far lower angle. Looking down on the car with a super wide angle lens just doesn't work. Plus, the camera strap... I mean, come on. At least crop that out.
 
This needs to be approached at a far lower angle. Looking down on the car with a super wide angle lens just doesn't work. Plus, the camera strap... I mean, come on. At least crop that out.

yeah and thanks. i will retake it again.
 
Jaime, there are a few problems with the HDR processing and all you can see is a bit of camera strap. You have a sharp eye. A dull brain but a sharp eye.

Hah!! omg... You made me laugh so hard! Well, I figured everyone else had contributed to the compositional and technical aspects, so I'd just point out the strap. hehe.. I'm still laughing. :lol:
 
Your second attempt is better. However I still think the shot you are using will not justify the car. But, I also like the way the fisheye looks just put it work in a different perspective.

You asked how to make your car look white, funny I thought it was silver. Do you have enough exposures? What software are you using?

Once we know this we can lend you a hand, but, before you post again use another perspective.
 
Your second attempt is better. However I still think the shot you are using will not justify the car. But, I also like the way the fisheye looks just put it work in a different perspective.

You asked how to make your car look white, funny I thought it was silver. Do you have enough exposures? What software are you using?

Once we know this we can lend you a hand, but, before you post again use another perspective.
Thanks for the reply. I only have one exposure for this picture. I loaded into photomatix pro " batch single photo" and have it do the rest of the work. After that, I polish it using Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4. I'm using Sony NEX 5 camera.
By the way, how do you shoot manual exposure? I'm using autoHDR on my camera. And by different perspective, what exactly do you mean? thanks again. I really need to crop that camera strap out of that picture too LOL I didn't even notice it until I upload that pic.
 

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