ad for my photography

[DeepSpring]

please tell me what you think of it. if i should move anything around change the text. thank you

 

[nitefly]

I like it apart from the text. I just don't like the font or the colour.

 

[ShootHoops]

I agree with Nath's comment about the text.

By not putting a period or anything after the "You name it" part, it sort of makes it look like it's saying that Deep Spring Photography is apart of the types of things you do (if that makes any sense). Maybe you could change the font of just that part of the text?

On the other hand, great pics. I love the one on the bottom left. Keep up the good work!

 

[DeepSpring]

ahhh period yes that makes much sense. I'll add that and change the text if i can find something i like online. But for sure ill make the deep spring a different font. thanks guys

 

[TBaraki]

I like your images and layout alot. The text/font has to go though. You have to look 'past' it to see the images which are what you are trying to sell.

Simple is best for product such as this. I'd avoid bright colours and wacky fonts.

You photos look really nice. I'm sure your customers will be very happy with their results.

 

[DeepSpring]

as for as the wording of it tho can do you think that can stay?

 

[Hfry]

Loose that Font! LOOKS CHEAP AND UNATTRACTIVE.... But i guess Its your style. (NOt trying to be rude, or Down on your style, but you could do better) But The Appeal Isnt there... Keep the dark back Ground. but Change the Text and Maybe play with the Color. A++ on the Pictures. Nice work. Good luck.

 

[CHRISTIAN2170]

for been honest... I dont like the font and the color

 

[DeepSpring]

I just noticed i didnt capitalize the "i" in it ill change that later

 

[ShootHoops]

I like the new one

 

[srobb]

Well, I would have agreed with losing the font and the color on the original. I think the new one is much, much better. It does not distract from the ad as a whole and gives a very professional touch to it. Very good work on the pics. I just love the lower left with the rose.

 

[Hfry]

Looks alot better... I would Honestly Play with A couple other fonts and Post the Different OPt. on here and take a poll.. Good luck. Looks a Shizz Load nicer. Props.

 

[aschen_engel]

Looks alot better... I would Honestly Play with A couple other fonts and Post the Different OPt. on here and take a poll.. Good luck. Looks a Shizz Load nicer. Props.

I would have to agree..play with the font more..For color you could keep it white or even try it in a nice silver/grey (not too dark though).. you don't always have to be different with free-fonts ;-) play around with some of your basics..if you need anything..let me know ^.^ (i'm not trying to be harsh, it just doesn't pop as much as I think it could!)

 

[D-50]

I was just looking at your website and noticed your pricing page. I would suggest raising those prices a bit. You need to position yourself a s a professional photographer 6-8 dollars a print is pretty low. I would not go below 20 or 30. If you do the framing and matting you can charge even more. Although you are young you dont want to come accross as young. Also if your selling event photography you may want to think about putting up some examples of events that you have photographed not just single pics. Potential customers are giong to want to see what you have done.

 

[Digital Matt]

Your website information does not work being right aligned like that, with everything else being center. I don't like the font choice either. I think you should come up with a logo for yourself, and stick with it. Then use a nice sans-serif font that is readable for your information. Don't try to over do the text. You want the attention on the photography.

I would also check the levels on some of those pictures to make sure you are getting good blacks.