Again, just some fun with the bestie.

cauzimme · Nov 15, 2015

Yeah so today i've done a photoshoot with 5 girls. The deal was, pay for the hotel room and feed me champagne and I'll shoot you. In the lot, one of my bestie, and my business partner. She's usually the butch type, the hipster bicycle girl but when she dress and put some effort, she's a total hottie, alternate pin up kinda style.

Here's some photos (this set is intended to be used for a Dominatrix, Mistress webpage so I asked her to try her best at the resting ***** face):

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cauzimme · Nov 15, 2015

Bonus, a simply drop dead gorgeous girl.

zulu42 · Nov 15, 2015

I like both sets quite a bit. Love the lighting. The only nit pick is on #4, the mirror shot has one of her eyes obscured by a curl of hair that's somehow a little weird looking and draws my eye. For the dominatrix vibe she could maybe even look a little more mean - like pointing a finger down at the camera or something. Not my area of expertise though lol.

Both ladies are lovely. Does the second girl have a red tattoo on her left hand? In both shots I can't quite figure out what's up with that hand.

Nice shots. I like that you have a real style developing. I could see your work going more "noire" with maybe some smoke, and some shadows in the lighting, like lit through window blinds or something.

FITBMX · Nov 15, 2015

Good sets. But in second set, you may want to "Burn" the background a little. The background has too much light, it pulls away from her, (and she deserves all the attention! :1398:

) And if you can get her to "pop" from door a little more it would look better. Also a little more fill light wouldn't hurt, her eyes have a Raccoon look, and a little more light on the eyes will solve that. And the last thing is on the last photo. on her right arm (camera left) there is a white line (I think from the lighting) that is distracting, but can be easily removed in Photoshop.

I bet they were very happy with your work, I would be!

Rob5589 · Nov 15, 2015

The white picture behind her head is distracting in #2 & 3 of the first set. Like #5 the best of those.

For the second set all I have is, WOW! :drool2:

cauzimme · Nov 15, 2015

zulu42 said:
I like both sets quite a bit. Love the lighting. The only nit pick is on #4, the mirror shot has one of her eyes obscured by a curl of hair that's somehow a little weird looking and draws my eye. For the dominatrix vibe she could maybe even look a little more mean - like pointing a finger down at the camera or something. Not my area of expertise though lol.

Both ladies are lovely. Does the second girl have a red tattoo on her left hand? In both shots I can't quite figure out what's up with that hand.

Nice shots. I like that you have a real style developing. I could see your work going more "noire" with maybe some smoke, and some shadows in the lighting, like lit through window blinds or something.

You're right, for the mirror shot I wasn't able to quite figure what I didn't like, it's the hair, she kinda look like a robot or something. She could have look a bit more mean but she's bubbly so am I, we were probablt having to much fun with the Champagne, haha.

Yes the second girl have a Henna tattoo on her hand.

FITBMX said:
Good sets. But in second set, you may want to "Burn" the background a little. The background has too much light, it pulls away from her, (and she deserves all the attention! ) And if you can get her to "pop" from door a little more it would look better. Also a little more fill light wouldn't hurt, her eyes have a Raccoon look, and a little more light on the eyes will solve that. And the last thing is on the last photo. on her right arm (camera left) there is a white line (I think from the lighting) that is distracting, but can be easily removed in Photoshop.

I bet they were very happy with your work, I would be!

Her eyes have a raccoon look for real, the MUA opted for a big smoky eye mad max style.
I'll give it a try and burn a bit, thankx

Rob5589 said:
The white picture behind her head is distracting in #2 & 3 of the first set. Like #5 the best of those.

For the second set all I have is, WOW!

I agree but I was at 6.3f, 200s, on a d300 with a 18-250mm 3.5-6.3, I need new gear to be able to play with dop. And the hotel was Lhotel, which is a Art place, all painting are originals so when you book a room, you sign a disclaimer saying you can't touch the artworks or a sensor will ring in the whole building, haha.

Maybe I can try to burn it a bit more.

FITBMX · Nov 15, 2015

cauzimme said:
Her eyes have a raccoon look for real, the MUA opted for a big smoky eye mad max style.
I'll give it a try and burn a bit, thankx

I noticed she a dark makeup around her eyes, I personally have never been a big fan on of that makeup style. But that is just personal opinion.

cauzimme said:
I agree but I was at 6.3f, 200s, on a d300 with a 18-250mm 3.5-6.3, I need new gear to be able to play with dop. And the hotel was Lhotel, which is a Art place, all painting are originals so when you book a room, you sign a disclaimer saying you can't touch the artworks or a sensor will ring in the whole building, haha.

Maybe I can try to burn it a bit more.

Your next portrait lens should be a prime, I really like the prime I have.

I have never heard of a hotel with art like that. Sure enough I would bump into one every other minute! :biglaugh:

cauzimme · Nov 15, 2015

FITBMX said:
cauzimme said:

Her eyes have a raccoon look for real, the MUA opted for a big smoky eye mad max style.
I'll give it a try and burn a bit, thankx

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I noticed she a dark makeup around her eyes, I personally have never been a big fan on of that makeup style. But that is just personal opinion.

cauzimme said:

I agree but I was at 6.3f, 200s, on a d300 with a 18-250mm 3.5-6.3, I need new gear to be able to play with dop. And the hotel was Lhotel, which is a Art place, all painting are originals so when you book a room, you sign a disclaimer saying you can't touch the artworks or a sensor will ring in the whole building, haha.

Maybe I can try to burn it a bit more.

Click to expand...

Your next portrait lens should be a prime, I really like the prime I have.

I have never heard of a hotel with art like that. Sure enough I would bump into one every other minute!

I was a bit anxious with 8 girls in a suite, 6 of us tipsy.
There's a suite where it was all pop art, originals from Warhol and Roy lichtenstein

FITBMX · Nov 15, 2015

cauzimme said:
I was a bit anxious with 8 girls in a suite, 6 of us tipsy.
There's a suite where it was all pop art, originals from Warhol and Roy lichtenstein

Holy monkey!!! :aiwebs_016: