Ain't Life a Doll?

[jdsfighter]

This is one of my first pictures I've ever taken with a DSLR. This was taken with my T3i the first day I received it (approx 2 weeks ago).

 

[WesternGuy]

First impressions (assuming you are looking for C&C) - it looks underexposed and the background is very distracting - the out-of-focus (OOF) face and the large patch of light draw the viewer's eye away from the main image. A lot of the main subject is a bit fuzzy, suggesting that your depth of field is very small and thus even some of the doll is OOF.
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WesternGuy

 

[jdsfighter]

First impressions (assuming you are looking for C&C) - it looks underexposed and the background is very distracting - the out-of-focus (OOF) face and the large patch of light draw the viewer's eye away from the main image. A lot of the main subject is a bit fuzzy, suggesting that your depth of field is very small and thus even some of the doll is OOF.
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WesternGuy

Thanks for the feedback. I was attempting to give it a somewhat grungy feeling, and I wasn't exactly sure how to work the composition.

 

[Haya.H]

Everything WesternGuy has said. Assuming thats a mirror behind the doll, or maybe just another doll. I would have taken the shot slightly more to the left. Like a profile view of the dolls face that would eliminate most of the distractions. Also i would crop it, too much space above the head, and to the left. Good work tho

 

[deggimatt]

Centered, looks creepy + I cant find anything interesting in this pic. sry

 

[Frequency]

Hi,. welcome
i too had the feeling that she stands too much on the center; i really like how the other face is seen at distance, yet disturbed by the waxy filler seen in between

Regards