All 'bout birds...

[rhino123]

Hi, just a few pics of ducks and other birds... Constructive Criticism most welcome.

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[Sisco]

Off to a good start, but the compositions are somewhat off kilter.

I know we can't make birds turn to us in mid air but the first one isn't eye grabbing, the tail feathers are great though!

Second one,I like this one the best out of the series, a tighter crop, leaving the duck and wake, would bring her to the forefront.

Third one is a miss, but try again!

Last, I like the white gull, pity the other was there as well.

 

[rhino123]

Off to a good start, but the compositions are somewhat off kilter.

I know we can't make birds turn to us in mid air but the first one isn't eye grabbing, the tail feathers are great though!

Second one,I like this one the best out of the series, a tighter crop, leaving the duck and wake, would bring her to the forefront.

Third one is a miss, but try again!

Last, I like the white gull, pity the other was there as well.

Thanks a lot Sisco... really appreciate your tips. I will try harder to get it better next time.