Amber |C&C|

[Mo.]

Another for the colour Yellow:

Amber by Half an Eye Photography, on Flickr

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[MLeeK]

Is the skin tone on her face supposed to look grey and dead? That needs some fixing if it isn't. She's gray/blue looking on the face.
The pose is good, I think she kind of looks cross eyed. The focus and exposure look great. She is positioned well in the scene. I'd like to see a bit more space at the bottom of the hands

 

[Mo.]

Is the skin tone on her face supposed to look grey and dead? That needs some fixing if it isn't. She's gray/blue looking on the face.
The pose is good, I think she kind of looks cross eyed. The focus and exposure look great. She is positioned well in the scene. I'd like to see a bit more space at the bottom of the hands

It's not really supposed to look that grey/blue. I can't really see it on my screen but thanks for the feedback.

 

[tirediron]

Agree with MLeek; skin tone is a bit off. Any particular reason you chose to shoot in landscape vice portrait aspect?

 

[The_Traveler]

this is pano, more than landscape and sort of unnecessary.

Since her hands are so close to the bottom edge, I think a tighter crop at the top would balance that.
She is a bit blue.
The blown-out bits on the top of her fingers are a real distraction.
I think this is really lacking a center point; the flowers she is holding are too small and her eyes can't be seen. IMO, this would have improved mightily if her eyes were visible.

 

[MK3Brent]

Some weird artifacts in front of her face, presumably a blade of grass/wheat... Looks strange, distracting.

Other than that, the WB is funny too. Very pale and it contrasts badly with yellow. Should be a quick fix.