An Angel

[Fotofashion.no]

hope you enjoy

 

[pisto1981]

She seems pretty toned!

Like it alot!

 

[cgipson1]

Nice!

 

[tirediron]

Well done!

 

[amolitor]

I'm not buying the wings. They're translucent in some places and not others, which, well, that's your choice and obviously a deliberate one, but it doesn't feel right to me.

Also, and far more important, the wings are square to the camera, and she is not.

Other than that, though, nicely done!

 

[Fotofashion.no]

did not add enough polys to them. Was hitting ram limits.

not sure what you mean by the camera comment.

 

[amolitor]

Her shoulders are twisted, right? They're the same height, but the shoulder camera right is closer to us than the shoulder camera left.

This means that the wing on the right should be quite a lot closer to us, out at the wingtip, and the wingtip on the left should be quite a bit further back, to really support the illusion that they are her wings.

Does that help?

 

[DarkShadow]

Very nice.

 

[Fotofashion.no]

ok thx for your explenation. The wing is rotated, but maybe it should be rotated more.

 

[amolitor]

Ok! I think maybe more rotation. Maybe dip (lower) the camera-right wingtip a bit as well? I don't see WHY it should be dipped from her posture, but it just feels like it ought to be.

 

[manicmike]

Nicely done.

 

[Fotofashion.no]

well will see if I'll render out the scene again. Rendertime is painfull (7,5h)

thanks for commenting.