An interesting model... C&C please...

[michael9000000]

 

[michael9000000]

Bump... I'm a loser... 😊

 

[412 Burgh]

Interesting... Are those tattoos or sharpie?

 

[michael9000000]

Interesting... Are those tattoos or sharpie?

They were permanent tattoos of questionable origin... I didn't ask. 😄

The model was actually amazing... She had fantastic spirit and energy.

 

[PinkDoor]

Do you have any where she's not biting her lip? It seems vicious vs seductive

 

[michael9000000]

 

[michael9000000]

Do you have any where she's not biting her lip? It seems vicious vs seductive

Posted... I'm glad you actually said vicious vs seductive, like she's gonna kill or f@@@ anyone that crosses her path... That's what she wanted, and that's what I was shooting for.

 

[PinkDoor]

I like the pose is the second one, but I think the lighting is best in the 3rd. That soft back light is not working for me. . . it's to "heavenly" for this girl I like her style!

 

[Jaemie]

I like the edginess, but her poses appear artificial and strained, like she's trying hard to be some image of sexy. That rarely works well. I like your technique in 1 and 2; it seems to flatter the model's personal style.

 

[michael9000000]

This is her softer, prettier look... It was just a test blast at the beginning of the shoot, but it was nice enough to keep.

 

[PinkDoor]

Love it! Love the lighting, the look, and the overall composition. You can see her eyes here, and she does not quite looks like she is about to whack the camera out of your hand

 

[chuasam]

I'm not fond of her expression

 

[michael9000000]

I'm not fond of her expression

Fair enough, but I've gotta give it to the girl... She was expressing something! dde09

 

[o hey tyler]

IMO, her face is far too red/orange in the first two photographs. I like the processing on 3 more, but it appears to be soft. If you could get a happy medium on 1&2, I think they'd be stronger. 4 has nice lighting, but you should watch the saturation on her hair. A lot of it is out of gamut and appears posterized. Perhaps if you brought down the magenta saturation a bit, more detail would be retained.

Just some food for thought.

 

[michael9000000]

IMO, her face is far too red/orange in the first two photographs. I like the processing on 3 more, but it appears to be soft. If you could get a happy medium on 1&2, I think they'd be stronger. 4 has nice lighting, but you should watch the saturation on her hair. A lot of it is out of gamut and appears posterized. Perhaps if you brought down the magenta saturation a bit, more detail would be retained.

Just some food for thought.

Thanks for the input... I'm glad you said that a lot of it appears "out of gamut and posterized" because that's what she was looking for. Here's the story, strange and true... She had visions of herself as the star of a B movie... An Army chick who went AWOL and went savage, lived in the woods, and seduced, shagged, and then killed every soldier that was sent to find her.

The lomo photos are supposed to be what the movie posters might look like.

I can't make this stuff up.

P.S. You haven't seen the photos with the big knife yet. Yikes!