She is quite beautiful
In the first one the shadow takes up a little too much of my attention. There's a clump of mascara or something with right upper eyelash that I would try to shop out. But the pose has a guarded cautious feel to it that I kind of like
In the second one I like the light and I really like the wind in the dress but the straight hanging arms doesn't feel flattering to me. I like to imagine this one with big YAY!!! arms and an energetic smile.