Andrea

[zivlai]

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[Patrice]

Well done, the lighting works. Cute model, she could smile more. Eyes seem soft in #1. Cheeks and forehead seem blown in #2 but that could be my monitor.

 

[zivlai]

thanks for advise

 

[rfosness88]

very cute! What kind of flash did you use? or whas it an intricate lighting set up?

 

[Moonlighter]

very nice, only the third picture - the brightly colored scarf distracts attention from the model. anyway, well done)

 

[unkes60]

Very very nice!!!

 

[Sarah23]

awesome! Love the flair in #4.

#1 does seem soft, like the focus fell on her hair in front of her.

 

[bdavis]

#1. Focus appears soft

#2. Just doesnt do anything for me

#3. The scarf is disctracting

#4. Dont like the flare, its really distracting

#5. The shadow on the wall is distracting, should be a lean white background.

 

[Mesoam]

nice shots MAKE HER SMILE!

 

[bigboi3]

Awsome shots!!

 

[MyaLover]

#1. Focus appears soft

#2. Just doesnt do anything for me

#3. The scarf is disctracting

#4. Dont like the flare, its really distracting

#5. The shadow on the wall is distracting, should be a lean white background.

Wow... glass half empty??


I personally am completely jealous of these shots.... LOVE #3, it frames her great eyes and face. Very nice. What was your lighting set up if you dont mind me asking?

 

[zandman]

is her lips dry on the second image? hm..

 

[mcuccia]

I like #2 best, her eyes are amazing (tho she'd need better makeup to make it a glam shot). She's beautiful and you could really improve by making her smile!

 

[zivlai]

thank you for advise