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Love the concept and some great shots! I love the choice of clothing as it fits the mood very well and takes away any forced sexiness (no need to flash the flesh for this type of photo).

I guess the only distracting thing for me that stands out is the odd intrusion of a shadow on the pillar to the right. it looks like something is sticking out in from of the light source like a broom or something. Everything else is explained in photo apart from that. Was it intentional?

On a side note your photostream is amazing! Love the landscapes but the portrait work is amazing, if I can take just a few shots like that ever I would be a happy man!
 

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That first one is... wow. Just really awesome. "Hauntingly beautiful" is very fitting, I think.
 
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Love the concept and some great shots! I love the choice of clothing as it fits the mood very well and takes away any forced sexiness (no need to flash the flesh for this type of photo).

I guess the only distracting thing for me that stands out is the odd intrusion of a shadow on the pillar to the right. it looks like something is sticking out in from of the light source like a broom or something. Everything else is explained in photo apart from that. Was it intentional?

On a side note your photostream is amazing! Love the landscapes but the portrait work is amazing, if I can take just a few shots like that ever I would be a happy man!

Thank you but I have a long way to go


Angelfood3 by Binga63, on Flickr
 

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All I can say is I love this, great work!
 

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I really like these, but do have a few nits.

IMO, the blood on the chin is too groomed and pronounced.

I would likely clone out the register on #1 & 3. In #2, it looks fine.

Catching the feather in mid-air in #1 is great. Just a shame it is horizontal rather than skewed.

These are minor and most likely just my opinion. Great work. Thanks for sharing.
 

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I like the lighting, and I love the concept, but I am really not liking the processing. Just seems a little over-processed to me.
 

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Yikes. I am not a fan of this type of thing, but you have some gorgeous work on your Flickr page.
 

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The processing is still just too much for me. It's so much that it's distracting, and in my opinion is reducing the overall quality of the shots. I think most of all the texture you've added is really detracting from the photos. There is a much more haunting and real look to the photos without the texture.

In that last composite you posted, I am really drawn particularly to the pose where she is in the shadows behind the wall. It's very emotive and dramatic, and I think would be an incredibly strong image just by itself.
 
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I really like the way her shadow on the wall in #2 reinforces the shot! NICE props and wardrobe (minimal, and PERFECT!). Great processing approach too...very nice!
 

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