Here is another attempt to rescue a single shot from a shoot gone horribly wrong. C&C most welcome. Or this maybe:
Aside from being broad lit, I'm having a bunch of trouble with the "snotty" expression. It's really a stopper for me. It makes me recoil a bit. The rest of the compsition isn't far off... lighting ratio is good, pose is OK, and I can even live with the clothing. I just wish she had a different expression. Nice go, though! Pete
I was thinking a little closer to constipation. Her expression is just screaming "man I need to pinch one off!" Other than the expression, I like. I agree with the lighting and compression comments as well!
I'm going to have to agree... I like the lighting and pose, but her facial expression leaves a lot to be desired.
Could you post a different pose/look perhaps. Sometimes when I think something is horribly bad, someone usually finds a way to tweak it back to life. Although the lighting is alright here, and it's a good clear shot, the pose is killing that. Pop another one up there, and maybe someone can help.
THanks a lot for the critques. I basically let this girl do her own poses and so far "constipation" seems to be a running theme. She even sed the same thing when I sent her a pic from the shoot (although not this one). I appreciate very much the comments and am feeling better since having another shoot with another girl and the pics have come out much better. I can't post them yet due to some issues with public pictures that she is having right now but I will be posting a few in the future once the issue is cleared up. Thanks everyone.