Another Bikini girl image ***NSFW***

[Trever1t]

C&C regarding image and processing desired.


_POR2330-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[frommrstomommy]

I really like this one! Much better than the last =P She does look cold to me though... but the processing makes me think dreamy, so it almost doesn't really bother me that she looks less warm than I'd imagine the coloring to be.

 

[frommrstomommy]

Is she untying her suit bottom?? lol it sort of looks like that at second glance. Oh my.

 

[ronlane]

Is she untying her suit bottom?? lol it sort of looks like that at second glance. Oh my.

I don't know, I wasn't there and didn't get an invite either..

 

[cgipson1]

Dang-it.. how am I supposed to get any work done around here, when you put up something like that! lol! I like it.... I am loving those hips...

 

[jwbryson1]

I think a touch more contrast would bring out her shape a bit more. Looks good.

 

[cgipson1]

My one nit is where her bra strap meets the water.. dodge it a bit for separation....

 

[YvetteC]

Is that the same girl?

 

[Trever1t]

Good critique, I did add a little, just a little warmth and contrast and I like it. I can't seem to get better definition by the tie on her bikini. Yes YvetteC, same girl. I have 700 frames from this session

 

[YvetteC]

Her head & face look so much better in this one...it doesn't even look like the same girl! Beautiful job

 

[amolitor]

There is much to like here. I quite like the ethereal processing, it's effective and really very lovely.

The pose, not so much. It looks in this shot like she has rather poorly done implants, for one thing. Also, her arm looks INCREDIBLY TINY. Or maybe her head looks huge? Or something. Her proportions just look completely off here.

I think you might have processed her face a little differently than the rest of the shot? This might be making her head "pop" more, and thus appear enormous, somehow.

 

[YvetteC]

There is much to like here. I quite like the ethereal processing, it's effective and really very lovely.

The pose, not so much. It looks in this shot like she has rather poorly done implants, for one thing. Also, her arm looks INCREDIBLY TINY. Or maybe her head looks huge? Or something. Her proportions just look completely off here.

I think you might have processed her face a little differently than the rest of the shot? This might be making her head "pop" more, and thus appear enormous, somehow.

I think her head might be enormous...In the last post, it was very evident but in this one, it seems more normal. I think the implants, untying bikini bottoms, long hair, etc. distract the eye so it isn’t so obvious.

 

[ronlane]

Good critique, I did add a little, just a little warmth and contrast and I like it. I can't seem to get better definition by the tie on her bikini. Yes YvetteC, same girl. I have 700 frames from this session

700? post 'em or it didn't happen. We will be your QC department. Start a thread "Trever's QC dept."

 

[ghache]

I like the shot, but i would like to have a bit more contrast, sharpness and the skin work is a bit over the top for me. overall its a good shot

 

[Trever1t]

First of all she's all natural - NO IMPLANTS - but I could be guilty of exaggerating her features a little
Too much booby?

There's really not too much skin work, the low contrast, brightness perhaps is making it appear as such but if you look at it full size on flickr you can see her skin details just fine.

I can post the retouch but it's very subtle and unless side by side probably not discernible.