Another portrait for c&c. Sorry!

[TylerF]

Some of you may have seen me posting a lot of portraits lately, but I'm really trying to get better at them and see no other way to do so then to post here for you to C&C them haha. So thank you in advance for putting up with my less than good portraits. I will probably be posting more in the next few days lol.

edit- just tried something different with my brother haha. not sure on the outcome

 

[reznap]

Keep it up, each time you post something new it's better than the last imo.

 

[MGriff240]

Keep it up, each time you post something new it's better than the last imo.

+1, it can only get better. :thumbup:

 

[TylerF]

thanks! Glad to know im making progress

 

[TylerF]

Bump for any other suggestions

 

[bigtwinky]

Start reading up on various lighting setups and ways to accomplish them. Seems that the pic of your brother you were going to a hatchet look.

Start reading and learning on top of shooting and practicing

 

[IgsEMT]

other then b&w, i think its a step backwards - look at kid's face --> split lighting doesn't do it for him in this case.
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