Another set to critique, if you please

[Jahxius]

After reading through my first post and the comments placed there I decided to place a few more of the photos I had taken, which I had previously thought to inferior to post, I now have a different view on them. I got the general consensus from my previous post that composition was my biggest issue. as far as composition goes are these any better?

Thanks again!

thanks again!

 

[oldmacman]

The first two are difficult to read composition because of the size, but I would avoid clipping the paw of the lion. The Rocket might work better as a landscape to frame the "ROCKET" and accentuate the length of the engine. Too bad the train is inside. It would be nice to see this shot with some sky instead of a ceiling. Love all those rivets and mottled texture though.

 

[OrionsByte]

Compositionally, these are much better than your previous posts. You still cut off the lion's paws though.

A typical mistake is framing your subject the way you want to without paying enough attention to what else is in the frame. For instance, in the first shot there's a bar going through the top right of the shot that's a little distracting. In the third shot, there's a ceiling light in the frame at the top right. Both of these can be easily fixed with a slight crop.

Your fourth shot isn't show up for me.

Nice work, I really like the 3rd one actually... what is it?

 

[Jahxius]

The third one is Rocket a historically very important steam locomotive in the development of the British Rail infrastructure, Im not completely up to speed on it but I believe at one point it was the fastest land vehicle in the world. Its housed in the British Science museum

Thanks again for the critique!