Any tips for improving this?

[hokies2379]

I truly love the mood of this shot. But I know there’s something in post I could have done to improve it, just not sure where to start. What suggestions would you have?

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[Jeff15]

Could do with being just a tad lighter....

 

[480sparky]

Not lighter overall. Just bring the shadows up to keep it from looking creepy.