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Hey guys!
I had the honour to make a shooting in a rest home (i hope this is the right translation)

Can you tell me please, if there is potential for improving this photos?

thank you!
Armin


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I'm not a fan of selective color, but they're all very nice.
 
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Thank you!
I'm not afan of selective colouring neither, but here it jumped to me ;)!
 

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I'm not afan of selective colouring neither, but here it jumped to me ;)!

I cant coment on a photography level as I am a noob but they look great IMO,

The second one stands out to me
 

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I like #s 2 & 3, but the SC in #1 makes it look like she's wearing her ring on the outside of a foil glove. I think if you go either full monochrome or full colour it would be a great shot.
 

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You are lucky. I had to shoot undercover in a rest home. No permission granted to me.

Nice shots. I like the selective color!
 

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The right hand in #3 is disconnected... it looks more to me like it belongs to a second person.

The first one, I'd have panned a bit to the left and made it more obvious it's a sewing machine as well as getting rid of the distracting background objects.

The second one is wonderful!
 

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