Redeyejedi
TPF Noob!
- Joined
- Nov 3, 2010
- Messages
- 161
- Reaction score
- 17
- Location
- Los Angeles, California
- Can others edit my Photos
- Photos OK to edit
#1 great subject, decent sooc, but nice with the post exampled....but perhaps crop more of left and leave more to right of image to broaden the "concept" of the shot by opening up the view the bird had.
#2 is ..eh...for me as squirrels are a dozen dimes a dozen out here but..the tree detracts, boughs are nice, a tad blown highlights, but sharp and focused.
#3 appeals to me as it seem this guy is saluting/singing pledge of allegiance, albeit lil fokker got his lil arms backwards...but you scored on the foreground branches not being too much of a nuisance on the overall. but again, sharp and focused.
#4 if that is truly your first attempt at macro and you nailed intent, and i applaud your effort and give mad dap to that one, very nice. although the flower bud, which is also in focus, is a tad distracting from the faux-bumblebee, whiich i assume is the subject.
#5 is ok, but i get lost in what the story is. perhaps if one of his books were laying on his chest telling a hard day of study, or a woman/partner next to him signifying romance, or a pet depicting companionship.....but i get lost in the message/meaning/pictory...
good work toga, me likey.
#2 is ..eh...for me as squirrels are a dozen dimes a dozen out here but..the tree detracts, boughs are nice, a tad blown highlights, but sharp and focused.
#3 appeals to me as it seem this guy is saluting/singing pledge of allegiance, albeit lil fokker got his lil arms backwards...but you scored on the foreground branches not being too much of a nuisance on the overall. but again, sharp and focused.
#4 if that is truly your first attempt at macro and you nailed intent, and i applaud your effort and give mad dap to that one, very nice. although the flower bud, which is also in focus, is a tad distracting from the faux-bumblebee, whiich i assume is the subject.
#5 is ok, but i get lost in what the story is. perhaps if one of his books were laying on his chest telling a hard day of study, or a woman/partner next to him signifying romance, or a pet depicting companionship.....but i get lost in the message/meaning/pictory...
good work toga, me likey.