are my portraits improving???

[flashgordio]

 

[JenLavazza]

I really like this!! Great job!

 

[alarionov]

I really like the pose in #1, its a bit too grayish can you lighten it up more? Also notice the bottom left corner where the backdrop did not reach, easy fix on that one though.

#2 I think can use a bit more contrast, IMHO, good shots for a beginner though keep shooting :thumbup:

 

[flashgordio]

still trying to get to grips with strobes...1 and 2 are off a couple of months ago.
heres one from weeks ago.

 

[flashgordio]

none of the photos have been edited yet as i thought i would get more c&c this way.
ive posted a few times but not had much response...not in clique yet......