Attempt at "Low Key" Portraiture

[Aayria]

Does this work... is it "really" low key, or is it missing something speciffic to the style?

Thanks for looking! =)

 

[PerfectlyFlawed]

Doesnt really look 'LowKey' to me.... but thats just me... i think theres to much light.. ? I dont know..lol I dont fully understand the concept myself.. but doesnt look like most lowkey portraits ive seen