its not too bad. i like the feel of it, try it with a tripod and set the timer on your camera. it looks like it might be abit crooked.
i like the light on the side of your face, i also like the smoke and the empty space it goes to. what ever is on your wall above your head isnt too bad im thinking if you had something bigger or nothing at all. it draws my eye there and i keep trying to figure out what it is...
nice shot, keep shooting!