B&W Long Exposure

[batmura]

Any thoughts on my B&W edit of this long exposure I made of Lower Manhattan would be appreciated.

EDIT: As per your request, I've posted a new edit titled #2 trying to achieve more contrast. Please let me know how it compares to the first one.

#1

#2

Manhattan Long Exposure Black & White (2) by batmura, on Flickr

 

[BlackSheep]

Wow, what an awesome spot to shoot! Neat shot.

To me, it looks either too dark and/or needs a bit more contrast, there's a lot of middle grey but no true white highlights.

 

[bullock1692]

Awesome.

 

[crashcart]

Agree about needing more contrast, but apart from that, fantastic shot! Amazing location.