I like the photo better WITH the pizza-sign, as it is all straight, not clipped off by the frame, and looks quite deliberately included, playing with its reflection in the window some, too.
I find the red a bit on the strong side, too, at first I wondered "Where am I? 'Black&White Forum?'", but I like the grain/noise (it is noise, I know). Was it added? To make it more ... "urban"?