Balboa Gift Shop

[mineralbison]

This is a photo i took in a gift shop in Balboa, California.
i feel like it may be a little too busy. i want as much criticism as possible.


http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6v031wA9Y1qdqm1so1_1280.jpg

 

[Jaemie]

Hiya. Any chance you can post the photo here, instead of a link? That's the preferred way of doing it and you'll get more responses. Thanks.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Its busy, because it just is. You portrayed it well. :thumbup:

 

[cayto]

i think there is nothing that captures the attention of the viewer, a lot of things, may be too much stuff to look...

What's the message that you want to transmit with the photo?

 

[KenC]

Not bad. At first I thought the upper and lower halves were two different images that would have been better separated, but after a while they worked together for me. This needs to be seen larger to make any judgments or decisions. I'd make a large print and then look it over and decide whether it needs any burning/dodging (or equivalents), tinting, etc.