Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by chips, Aug 19, 2004.
u like? u dislike? how could these be imporved?
any comments/criticisms welcome
I really like the second. The only thing I was suggest is having it be horizontal. There just seems to be a little too much black, and a little too much sky, and a horizontal frame might fix that.
I agree with pilgrim (though I like the first one better). Crop just as the sky turns a bit lighter blue and I think that'd help the shot a lot.
I like the perspective the cross(?) adds in the first shot a lot.
I think the second one is perfect. Very ghost-story-ish. I like it.
I really like the first shot. Composition is good.
Nice work on both! :thumbsup:
You've captured a wonderful image here. I tried to work out some suggestions made earlier, but I can't be sure if I've improved anything.
My only concern was trying to show more detail with the "Sea Oats" in the foreground. I tried pushing up the 3/4 tones into midrange.
As for horizontal. I'll let others decide. I like them both.
wow thanks central183, i quite like the landscape. I dont really like the second one though, just looks wonky to me.
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