u like? u dislike? how could these be imporved? any comments/criticisms welcome
C chips TPF Noob! Joined May 25, 2004 Messages 68 Reaction score 0 Location England Aug 19, 2004 #1 u like? u dislike? how could these be imporved? any comments/criticisms welcome
P pilgrim TPF Noob! Joined Dec 8, 2003 Messages 806 Reaction score 2 Location Victoria BC Canada Aug 19, 2004 #2 I really like the second. The only thing I was suggest is having it be horizontal. There just seems to be a little too much black, and a little too much sky, and a horizontal frame might fix that.
I really like the second. The only thing I was suggest is having it be horizontal. There just seems to be a little too much black, and a little too much sky, and a horizontal frame might fix that.
B BrettG TPF Noob! Joined Jun 25, 2004 Messages 111 Reaction score 0 Aug 19, 2004 #3 I agree with pilgrim (though I like the first one better). Crop just as the sky turns a bit lighter blue and I think that'd help the shot a lot. I like the perspective the cross(?) adds in the first shot a lot.
I agree with pilgrim (though I like the first one better). Crop just as the sky turns a bit lighter blue and I think that'd help the shot a lot. I like the perspective the cross(?) adds in the first shot a lot.
Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member Joined Feb 5, 2004 Messages 21,168 Reaction score 110 Location North Central Illinois Website corryttc.blogspot.com Can others edit my Photos Photos NOT OK to edit Aug 19, 2004 #4 I think the second one is perfect. Very ghost-story-ish. I like it.
S ShutterBug4_4 TPF Noob! Joined Jun 16, 2004 Messages 252 Reaction score 0 Location Duluth, MN Aug 20, 2004 #5 I really like the first shot. Composition is good. Nice work on both! :thumbsup:
C central183 TPF Noob! Joined Jul 29, 2004 Messages 9 Reaction score 0 Location North Carolina Aug 20, 2004 #6 You've captured a wonderful image here. I tried to work out some suggestions made earlier, but I can't be sure if I've improved anything. My only concern was trying to show more detail with the "Sea Oats" in the foreground. I tried pushing up the 3/4 tones into midrange. As for horizontal. I'll let others decide. I like them both. Great Job
You've captured a wonderful image here. I tried to work out some suggestions made earlier, but I can't be sure if I've improved anything. My only concern was trying to show more detail with the "Sea Oats" in the foreground. I tried pushing up the 3/4 tones into midrange. As for horizontal. I'll let others decide. I like them both. Great Job
OP OP C chips TPF Noob! Joined May 25, 2004 Messages 68 Reaction score 0 Location England Aug 22, 2004 #7 wow thanks central183, i quite like the landscape. I dont really like the second one though, just looks wonky to me.
wow thanks central183, i quite like the landscape. I dont really like the second one though, just looks wonky to me.