Why don't you take the first shot, tex? We can always use more needless agitation and provocation.
What's up with the blackened lower left corner? Is that a lens shade issue, or just a strong vignette applied to the image? all the corners seem to have a pretty steep vignette, over a very small radius.
This shot had great potential, but the composition did not work here. She also looks blue. With soft bridal images like this I find that a vignette rarely adds anything unless the image is converted to b/w.