BEAUTY MEETS BEAST....WHAT AN OPPORTUNITY!!!

[AMOMENT]

I recently got to shoot a few friends of mine who are dancers. We were out wandering around this really rustic place when we came upon this deer! Got these shots!! Not perfect....but what a moment!!

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73 by Jadelm, on Flickr

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83 by Jadelm, on Flickr

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85 by Jadelm, on Flickr

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75 by Jadelm, on Flickr

 

[pixmedic1 1]

very nice..that deer WAS beautiful. thanks for sharing. the B&W was my favorite. #1 was too tilted for my tastes.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Try not to frame your subjects so close to the edg of the frame.
The first is nearly adequate, but the others cause unneeded tension.

Dutch tilt, just because?

The bigger problem I see here is the beast bisecting the subject, making compositional choices very awkward and limited.

Looking again, the first has the beast below her center point, greatly helping the image, if it weren't for that tilt.

 

[MLeeK]

Please, for the love of all things holy straighten your camera out. You've discovered the tilt, however now you need to figure out how to use it well. It should not make you want to tilt your head or feel if the subject is tipping over.

They're gorgeous otherwise!

 

[AMOMENT]

LOL...I discovered the tilt in lightroom....LOL, got a bit carried away. haha. Yeah, bitterjewler...it happened so wuick and I do agree the "communication" between them was a bit awkward =)))

 

[Light Guru]

The large text is distracting.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

I realize you couldn't order the dear around. But poor composition is poor composition regardless of the circumstances.

On the other side of the coin YOU could get lower to effect the perspective.

 

[AMOMENT]

I kind of rushed and didn't take too much time bc I was so excited to get the shot...I know this is an amateur move and something I have to work on. I was actually on the ground but lol, the dancer, being a dancer, though GORGEOUS, did not want me getting a pic from the leg/butt up view ya know?

 

[cgipson1]

Is there is a reason this is still in your Exif? Copyright Notice Copyright George McCullough

 

[kundalini]

The most interesting photos you have posted since I quit bothering to look.

Serendipity is a wonderful thing.

Thanks for sharing.

 

[MLeeK]

Is there is a reason this is still in your Exif? Copyright Notice Copyright George McCullough

Your camera was used and this was the guy who owned it before you. You need to go into the Copyright settings in your camera and remove it!

 

[amolitor]

Has nobody else noticed that this is a not particularly good composite?

 

[cgipson1]

Has nobody else noticed that this is a not particularly good composite?

I don't comment on her photos anymore.. faked or not....

 

[AMOMENT]

And yet u just did Charlie? dude let the animosity go already I'm tired for u. Whatever u think I did or didn't do politically wrong or right is so 6 months ago. ;p move on fella! Yes my camera was previously owned and I went into settings and still can't remove it. I only tried once so I need to pull out my manual

As for comment of these being fake well if u think that there is no way I can proove they are not nor do I care to try to entertain.

 

[Mach0]

Your buddy has some guts. At least he didn't charge her.