I am new, but not thin skinned. Bring on all the comments as blunt as you like.
This was a shot of a bee, not an accident.
Why wide angle? It was on the camera and I am still figuring out when to use what. BTW why not?
DOF could have been a bit bigger, agreed, but I was wanting the flowers to be out of focus. The bee should have been in focus and the lesson (one of) is that I should have bracketed the shot.
Cropping, I like your close crop bee, but I liked the framing that the flowers provide.
If I could have composed the shot, I would move the bee to the left so that it would be looking to the bigger part of the frame.
You now know the thought process and may even have a good idea on where I am (rookie).