I really like the house effect of scary and bloody but I feel the subject needs to be lit more and maybe be sitting in the chair to the left to get that more locked in feel as he would be looking toward the window. That is how I would change it. That is me though. Besides that awesome and like it.
That's the first thing I thought guys - was something from a game or something. Even if it was real - the subject blends in w/ the darkness - somehow, brighten it up just a little bit