Berkeley Sunset C&C

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Shot this one a couple days ago. The sunset was amazing!

Tell me what you guys think. C&C


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Looks like it was a nice sunset indeed. I think it could do with a bit less water in the foreground. The horizon is alot not straight (left side is slightly lower).. Maybe a little bit dark as well?
 
Looks like it was a nice sunset indeed. I think it could do with a bit less water in the foreground. The horizon is alot not straight (left side is slightly lower).. Maybe a little bit dark as well?

Better?

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First one is better imo, love it!

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I would crop so that you rid yourself of some of the right side water and then some of the sky and the red cloud. Crop below it, it doesnt add anything to the image.

I do like the exposure though and cropping it would make the pier (or whatever) a little more symetrical in a diagonal leading the viewer.

In other words, crop off 1/4 of the right side and about 1/4 off the top, I held my hands up to the screen boxing it that wat. I think it would look nice.
 

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