Bikini Beach Shoot C&C Please

[jamesino]

Here's a recent shoot I did. Lighting was natural with a light reflector for fill. C&C would be appreciated. Feel free to edit the photos if you'd like.

 

[Sw1tchFX]

A little over saturated and her eyes are too bright (like creepy bright) but other then that, they're great.

 

[JamesDD]

the left eye really takes all my attention on the first one but other than that i think they are great.

 

[rubbertree]

in both photos, her eyes don't match. In the first shot, you can barely see her left eye while in the next shot, her left eye is way too bright.
Also, her tan lines on her chest are very distracting. Fill those in so the skin tone matches.

 

[jamesino]

Thanks for the comment. I have adjusted the eyes so that their luminance match.