Bikini shoot teaser

[ghache]

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[Robin Usagani]

Send me the password to the private one bro.

 

[dalex100]

WOW... breathless!

 

[redessa]

Something about it seems off to me. I'm thinking maybe you should have shot from higher up because it looks to me like you're a little low which is causing her butt and thighs (well, the one thigh I can fully see) to be the closest to the camera and making seem bigger than I think they probably are. Or maybe have had her pose with a slight lean toward the camera which would have pushed her hips back and given a more slimming look. Or even a tigher crop cause from the waist up this shot is gorgeous, I'm just not sure it's all that flattering from the waist down.

 

[Jace]

I agree with Red... great shot, I just would have had her turn a bit so her left cheek wasn't showing.

 

[LizardKing]

Something about it seems off to me. I'm thinking maybe you should have shot from higher up because it looks to me like you're a little low which is causing her butt and thighs (well, the one thigh I can fully see) to be the closest to the camera and making seem bigger than I think they probably are. Or maybe have had her pose with a slight lean toward the camera which would have pushed her hips back and given a more slimming look. Or even a tigher crop cause from the waist up this shot is gorgeous, I'm just not sure it's all that flattering from the waist down.

This is one of those times when I'd love to have an "Unlike" button... Just kiddin'

In regards to the picture, I saw it the other day and there was something I didn't like but couldn't really tell what it was. Now, I think it's because it lacks depth... Probably the lighting is wrong, but I don't know much about lightning, so can't be sure.

Regards,
LizardKing

 

[ManhattanShutterBug]

I really like it however I agree a shallower DOF would be nicer and I would clean up the along on her leg just a tad

 

[HomelessBoy]

It would be so much better if she was nude.

 

[Forkie]

I'm afraid you'll have to post a few more photos of her for me to give a decent critique.

I think with just one photo, I don't quite get the feel of the shoot. I really think I need to see more so that I may be "in tune" with the session and appreciate how you can shoot a hot girl in several different provocative poses in order for me to thoroughly assess your work.

That's the only true way to be fair, both to me and to you.

I await, in anticipation of further examples.

 

[lieforalie]

Where are the rest, hm?

 

[Kerbouchard]

I guess I am the only one who thinks it is overexposed. Model is cute, posing is nice, but the lighting/exposure just doesn't work for me.

 

[ghache]

Thanks everyone for the feedback! i will post some more once i go back home.

 

[Geaux]

lol @ 266 views in less than 12 hours.


We need moar of the red head!

 

[LizardKing]

I guess I am the only one who thinks it is overexposed. Model is cute, posing is nice, but the lighting/exposure just doesn't work for me.

Nono, I agree. There's something wrong with the exposure.

 

[ghache]

added more shots for the curious