Bite me

[Josh66]

0802201401 by J E, on Flickr

Not quite sure if this one is "tame enough for TPF". If not, I think my time here is over.

I have had photos reported in the past because there was ammunition visible in them. From my understanding, that is not actually against the rules though.

Transmitter was dead, so I was limited to one light - I think it could have definitely used a second one...

Small edit:
https://www.flickr.com/photos/j__e/14815137162/

 

[terri38 9]

It's fine, Josh!

I like the whole "bite the bullet" idea; as well as the composition here. I see what you mean about the shadow on the right side of the frame. I don't think it does the image any particular harm, other than a loss of detail at that side of the bullet.

 

[manaheim]

It seems like this image has something to say, but it's not clear to me what it is saying.

The image itself seems well done. A little too dark on the right. (one light, as you mentioned... maybe a reflector or even a bit of foil might have helped?

 

[mmaria]

agree with Mana, again...

 

[JustJazzie]

I like it!!

 

[Josh66]

I plan on reshooting it with two lights - per the original plan.

I also will work on getting her to look "more pissed off", l have a very clear idea in my head of how I want it, and this isn't quite there.

I think it will "say more" after I have perfected it. I had high hopes for this one, lol, but now I'm sort of seeing it as a test shot. I know what worked and what didn't and next time will be better.