Black and White Portrait of Model

[Tim Ray]

 

[jman6785]

i like. shes pretty.

 

[Cooler_King]

Great photo.

As you are a professional can I just make a tiny criticism?

The shadow from her hair on the right side (models left) darkens the eye to much. It almost looks bruised.

 

[Shockey]

Very nice photo.
I like the lighting and the processing.
I would like to see more of her personality in the shot and some angles in the shot.
Locked straight into the camera shoulders squared is not what I like to see in a portrait.
She is very photogenic, I love the top she is wearing.

 

[JMLPictures]

I think in this picture the straight on works very well.

Maybe just a tad less headroom though...

josh

 

[The_Traveler]

i'd hit it.

jk. Nice picture.

What kind of a moronic statement is this.
Your response to a well done picture is that you would scr*w her?

Grow the hell up you jerk!

 

[The_Traveler]

I think in this picture the straight on works very well.

Maybe just a tad less headroom though...

josh

Ditto both statements.
Strong assertive picture.

 

[jbylake]

I'd like to see how many more times you can get your initals, name, and name with dot com on 1 watermark of 1 model.

Seriously, maybe it's just me, but it (your biography of a watermark) totally distracts, and ruins the whole thing for me.

I do like the contrast though. It's as good as it gets in my opinion.

J.

 

[JMLPictures]

i'd hit it.

jk. Nice picture.

What kind of a moronic statement is this.
Your response to a well done picture is that you would scr*w her?

Grow the hell up you jerk!

I think some people just go to this site to see the pretty ladies...

I think people like this SUCK!

Josh

 

[Hybrid Designz]

I absolutely love this picture! Lets see some more photos of this model and shoot pls

 

[jennyjen]

You're a very pretty girl. Nice picture.

 

[Sleepy_Sentry]

I know a lot of professional work depends on what the client's wants and needs are, but I think this is a boring photo. It might as well be a school photo. I'd like to see some interesting angles.

 

[Auspiciousnight]

I know I am a newb, but I would have had her turn a bit to open the right side so the part in her hair framed her face a bit more.

Like the B&W tho.

One of my biggest pet peeves in general (maybe a bit off subject) But strapless tops on women are very unflattering to their bodies. But thats more of a personal opinion

Jeans look good tho with the B&W

 

[eleganteye]

I like the appearance of the fabric of the pants. Care to comment on the process -- is this straight out of the camera, are they shiny jeans? curious as to what causes the effect.

 

[kundalini]

Lovely model to shoot.

My first reaction was that she was too square to the camera, more in a manly pose. Then I noticed her stare and slight curled lip. It looks as if she wants to TCB..... and with those guns, I believe she could hold her own. Unfortunately, the bottom half shows a completely different emotion for me.

Because of the way her hair falls over to her left, I think the main light may have been better on camera right to avoid the shadow on her left eye.

Her eyes are about 1/4 from the top of the image, so yeah, I'd take a little off the top.

TBH, the straight-on pose is not the most attractive, but can be used effectively.