Focus looks sharp in the eyes (where it should be). I like the DOF because you can make out other children but they are not distracting to your subject. The exposure seems nice.
Is there a story behind this? The expression on her face looks like what you might see on those commercials for sponsoring a child in an impoverished country but I don't think that is the case (no offense intended, if that is your daughter or something).
Nice shot. It looks very photojournalistic. I like it.
Looks great. Good expression, nice texture. Very nice. It looks like you have a subtle HDR effect in there. Personally, I think it takes away from the image. But that's my taste.