Wow you guys, thanks so much, they look way better softened.
The model is my fiance, so I wasn't uncomfortable with her, but I tried to manage the shoot as if she was a stranger, but I didn't know how she should pose. I had a few ideas but she knows how to have fun so that helped me a lot.
We swapped around the house so now the bedroom is a red room with 2 Windows with ugly shades its also a lot larger and more well lit, so a reshoot will probably happen. I'll have to post the results.