I find the overall image a wee bit dark perhaps. A lot of detail has been lost in the dark areas, which I would think would play a vital role in an image such as this one.
The composition and choice of scene would undoubtably work had the image been exposed differently. Just my opinion.
I sort of messed up the developing of this roll a little (underdeveloped) so it is dark. I didn't think it took too much away from the image.............but you thought differently thanks